My poem is about water. It includes water falling water on leafs. The visuals are important to include because it makes a sense of what is the things that I am talking about and showing you.
The spacial effects effect it by making it look better. also it can make it look more interesting.and it can cover up mistakes.
I am satisfied with my results because it is really interesting. Also I think that I could have but some more b roll. But other than that I think it is great.
The spacial effects effect it by making it look better. also it can make it look more interesting.and it can cover up mistakes.
I am satisfied with my results because it is really interesting. Also I think that I could have but some more b roll. But other than that I think it is great.
The visuals were awesome
ReplyDeleteMusic was a little too loud, i couldn't hear you speaking your poem
The effects like ken burns were awesome!
Compliment:Poem was unique
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:Music is distracting
Compliment:The effects were awesome
Your visuals were great Nice use of the Ken Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteYou could have lowered the music and recited your poem a little slower I couldn't understand you.
Otherwise your poem was great!
I liked how you used the Ken's Burns effect.
ReplyDeleteThe music was too loud, as I couldnt hear you. Also, it cut off at the end.
I liked the rain falling onto the glass and dripping down
good entry
ReplyDeleteneeds a better ending
good visuals
Nice photos, could have had b-roll that matches better, good poem
ReplyDeletegreat job
ReplyDeletewater dropping
voice over
Compliment: Nice Introduction
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Music Overwhelming
Compliment: Creative shots
Nice photos
ReplyDeleteI kept watching the same photos over and over
Nice job
It has good Visuals of water
ReplyDeletethe music kinda blocks the audio
The video stops at the end cutting the rest off
Great poem. Could have turned down the music a little so it balances with your voice. Great visuals
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the water effect to match your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think maybe you should practice the poem more, read it clearly, and make sure it doesn't stop at the end.
Really nice poem and song in the background.
I like the music you have.
ReplyDeletethe voice over had stutters and there was cut off words at the end.I liked that ken burns you did
I like how the music in the back matches the poems words.
ReplyDeleteYou could have gotten way more b-roll and also better b-roll.
I also like how your audio was equalized.
nice visuals
ReplyDeletethe audio could have been better
good job
Your visuals are really nice! I think that the music is a little loud. Your special effects were cool!
ReplyDeleteVisuals really related to the voiceover
ReplyDeleteVoice over does not really seem rehearsed and got cut off at the end.
Nice use of transitions.
good meaning
ReplyDeleteneeded your own shot B-roll
good reading and effects
The music matches so well! I just feel like you could've gotten more B-Roll! I loved the effects you used, in my opinion your video looks the 'coolest.'
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I likes your visuals
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've evened out your audio.
Compliment: Your poem was creative
I liked your B-Roll
ReplyDeleteThere was a brief pause, also I didn't really understand part of your B-Roll, the background music was really loud so i couldn't hear what you were saying.
I liked image in the beginning.
I liked your visuals.
ReplyDeleteI think the music should have been lowered because I could barely hear your voice.
I liked the actual poem and how you read it.
good audio
ReplyDeletegood b-roll
nice job
Good B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteYour voice sounded shaky and your voice got cut off in the end, also the music was to loud in the end you couldn't understand what yo were saying.
Good enfaces on your poem.
I like the music in the back round.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is your audio.
I also like your B-roll.